How to do a great rendering?

1. How to do a great rendering?

Khasanova Galiya Anvarovna
Pak Svetlana Vissarionovna

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AGENDA
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What is Rendering?
New structure of the
rendering
Example from the
book
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Students’ practice
Feedback and Q&A

3. WHAT IS RENDERING?

To render - to change words into a different
language or form (Cambridge Dictionary)
РЕФЕРИРОВАН
ИЕ
процесс формирования
навыков связного и
аргументированного
изложения мыслей,
фактов на иностранном
языке

4. Процесс Реферирования это …

Процесс работы со статьей
1. Чтение оригинального текста.
2. Краткое и обобщенное изложение
содержания материала.
3.Использование способов
смыслового свертывания –
перифраза и обобщения.
Приемы обобщения:
Резюмирующее обобщение - сведение
нескольких однородных положений к их
сущности.
Выборочное обобщение – выделение
одного наиболее типичного и
показательного факта в качестве
обобщенной характеристики положений
материала.

5. ОСНОВНЫЕ ЗАДАЧИ РЕФЕРИРОВАНИЯ 1) выделение основного и главного; 2) краткое формулирование этого главного. ТО ЕСТЬ, сокращение

исходного материала:
- путем отсеивания второстепенного и несущественного
- путем перефразирования главной мысли в краткую форму
речевого произведения.

6. INTRODUCTION

Rendering is divided in 3 parts
INTRODUCTION
MAIN BODY
CONCLUSIO
N
ВВОДНАЯ
ЧАСТЬ
ОСНОВНАЯ
ЧАСТЬ
ЗАКЛЮЧЕНИ
Е

7. Основные изменения

1) Когда нет информации о author/source/date of the
article, этого просто не нужно упоминать. Не
нужно говорить "К сожалению автор неизвестен...)
То есть, озвучивается только та информация которая
дана по факту – но обязательно перифразируя текст
2) Исключаем упоминание aim/purpose of the article
3) In Introduction: исключаем фразу
The article can be divided into some logically connected
parts…
4) In Introduction: если в статье имеется какие-либо
визуальные части (номера, подзаголовки, графики и
т.д.) они должны быть озвучены в начале.
The article has a/some outstanding characteristic(s) of
the structure. There are some/number (e.g. 3, 8)
subheadings.

8. Основные изменения

5) In Body: нельзя озвучивать слово paragraph вместо
говорим: ideas
The 1st paragraph discusses …
The author starts the article by emphasizing several ideas…
Firstly, it describes…
6) Использовать огромный запас синонимов
to say/to tell, как минимум 10. Каждый раз другой
синоним, желательно не повторяться!
7) Обязательно использовать Linking words, чтобы
связывать между собой предложения при
реферировании (см. распечатки).
8) In Conclusion:
- Если заключение уже есть в статье, идет просто
перефразирование данного текста
- Если его нет, нужно использовать последний абзац
или последние 2-3 предложения.
9) Избавиться от фраз: That's it...; I'm done...; That's all...

9. ARTICLE RENDERING SAMPLE

10. ARTICLE RENDERING SAMLE

11. I. Introduction

Main points:
The headline of the
article
The author
The source of
publication
The date of publication
The main idea
Outstanding
characteristics of the
article structure
(subheadings, graphs,
pictures, etc.)
The title of the article is “New Zealand free trade
deal with UK promises to
‘drive collaboration’ with legal regulators”.
The author of the article is Ben
Rigby.
The article is published on The Global Legal Post
website.
The article is devoted to a free trade deal between
UK and New Zealand.

12. If there is an outstanding characteristic of the article structure:

The article has outstanding characteristics of its structure
and it has three sub-headings/… it is divided into several
parts by three sub-headings (только в данном контексте
звучит слово “parts”).

13. II. Main body

The best way to
start:
The author starts by…
+Ving(синонимы
глаголов say/tell): stating
that...; emphasizing the
idea that…
Neutral verbs: to
mention; to state; to
underline; to point out; to
emphasize the idea
that…; to demonstrate
the idea that…
Example: At the beginning of the article the author
quotes the UK government as predicting that the new
deal will enhance cooperation between UK and New
Zealand regulators and facilitate lawyers practice in
both jurisdictions.
Paraphrased: The author starts by emphasizing the
idea that… the UK government predicts enhanced
cooperation between UK and New Zealand regulators
and facilitated practice for lawyers in both jurisdictions
as a result of the new deal.

14. II. Main body

Stating the main
ideas of the
article:
Linking words:
A) Adding one idea to the
other:
• Moreover, the author
underlines/points out
that...
• Furthermore…
In addition to this…
Example:
According to the Department for International Trade,
the deal is expected to open access to local practice
and arrange “efficient and transparent” procedures
for recognizing professional qualifications. Subject to
the agreement, UK and New Zealand lawyers will be
allowed to practice without requalification.
Paraphrased: Moreover, the author underlines that
the deal is anticipated to provide access to local
practice and establish efficient and transparent
methods for recognizing professional qualifications. As
per the agreement, lawyers from the UK and New
Zealand will be able to practice without undergoing
requalification.”

15. II. Main body

Stating the main
ideas of the
article:
Linking words:
A) Adding one idea to the
other:
• Moreover, the author
underlines/points out
that...
• Furthermore…
In addition to this…
Example:
It is pointed out that the Law Society of England and
Wales and, in particular, its president Stephanie Boyce,
highly valuates the new deal as it “reflects the importance
of market access for services in both economies”.
Moreover, the Law Society considers the agreement’s
chapter on domestic regulation as a first in both countries’
practices.
Paraphrased: Furthermore, the author points out that
the Law Society of England and Wales, including its
president Stephanie Boyce, highly regards the new deal
as it reflects the significance of market access for services
in both economies. Additionally, the Law Society views
the chapter on domestic regulation in the agreement as a
pioneering step in the practices of both countries.”

16. III. Conclusion

Contrast:
In conclusion…
A) the author + синоним
глагол say/tell (Example:
underlines that…/ points
out that…; etc.)
B)Passive voice: It is
pointed out that…
Examples:
The article concludes by saying that the UK government
considers the new deal as a tool for joining the Trans-Pacific
Partnership, apart from the partnering with Norway, Japan, and
Australia.
Paraphrased:
A)In conclusion, the author points out that the new deal is
viewed by the UK government as a means to join the TransPacific Partnership, in addition to partnering with Norway,
Japan, and Australia.
B) In conclusion, it is pointed out that the UK government
views the new deal as a means to enter the Trans-Pacific
Partnership and establish partnerships with Norway, Japan,
and Australia.

17. II. Main body

Contrast:
Linking words:
В) Оpposing one idea to
the other:
Examples(not from the article):
However, the author demonstrates the idea that despite
common beliefs, unconventional methods can yield
positive results.
Nevertheless, the author states the idea that traditional
approaches have their own merits and have stood the test
of time for a reason.
However,...
Nevertheless,…
On the contrary, …
On the contrary, the author mentions the idea that a
balance between innovation and tradition is essential for
optimal outcomes.

18. 10 Synonyms of to say/to tell:

1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
7.
8.
9.
10.
State
Express
Articulate
Convey
Communicate
Utter
Voice
Declare
Announce
Mention

19. Linking words to develop arguments:

20. Practice time!

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