Essay #4. Correction of the Essay

1. Correction of the Essay

Corrected by: Alexsander the greatest

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• Dear Madam! I’m writing to you because I ordered some
things in your Internet shop. I have got one red woolen
sweater, medium size, and light blue jeans, large size, but
I have ordered a yellow woolen sweater, large size, and
light blue jeans, medium size. I disappointed that you’re
working so irresponsible. I wanted to take this clothes in
my trip. But I can’t do it now because red sweater is too
much vivid for me and I also can’t wear this big jeans.
Please, refund my offer. I have already sent back all
clothes. Best wishes your customer
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• Dear Madam! I’m writing to you because I ordered some
things in your Internet shop. I have got one red woolen
sweater, medium size, and light blue jeans, large size, but
I have ordered a yellow woolen sweater, large size, and
light blue jeans, medium size. I disappointed that you’re
working so irresponsible. I wanted to take this clothes in
my trip. But I can’t do it now because red sweater is too
much vivid for me and I also can’t wear this big jeans.
Please, refund my offer. I have already sent back all
clothes. Best wishes your customer
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• Dear Madam! I’m writing to you because I ordered some
things in your Internet shop. I have got one red woolen
sweater, medium size, and light blue jeans, large size, but
I have ordered a yellow woolen sweater, large size, and
light blue jeans, medium size. I disappointed that you’re
working so irresponsible. I wanted to take this clothes in
my trip. But I can’t do it now because red sweater is too
much vivid for me and I also can’t wear this big jeans.
Please, refund my offer. I have already sent back all
clothes. Best wishes your customer
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5. Al Correctionitio ala one mistakesio

• Refund is a kind of British word, I recommend you to
look for American English, it’s a lot better & easier =)
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6. America