Easy ways to improve cohesion

1.

EASY WAYS TO
IMPROVE COHESION
IELTS
WRITING
TASK
2
VOCABULARY

2.

1. FOUR WORD
COLLOCATIONS
VOCABULARY

3.

COLLOCATIONS MAKE OUR WRITING SOUND
MORE NATURAL
AND
MORE COHESIVE.
VOCABULARY

4.

COLLOCATIONS
REDUCE ERRORS BY USING
GRAMMATICALLY
PERFECT CONSTRUCTIONS,
AND THEREFORE IMPROVE
VOCABULARY
GRAMMATICAL ACCURACY

5.

MAY BE DUE TO THE
THERE ARE A NUMBER OF
IS ONE OF THE MOST
IS ONE OF THE MOST IMPORTANT
PLAY AN IMPORTANT ROLE IN
VOCABULARY
THE RESULTS OF THIS STUDY

6.

IT CAN BE OBSERVED THAT
THIS MAY BE DUE TO
THIS MAY BE DUE TO THE FACT THAT
THE RESULTS OF THIS STUDY
VOCABULARY
AN IMPORTANT ROLE IN THE
IN THE CASE OF THE

7.

USE COLLOCATIONS IN THE
INTRODUCTION.
VOCABULARY

8.

INTRODUCTION:
Economic development is one of
the most critical elements of
government policy due to the
fact
that...
VOCABULARY

9.

INTRODUCTION:
Public education is one of the most
important challenges facing the
western world today. This may be
VOCABULARY
due to the fact that...

10.

INTRODUCTION:
Health issues are some of the
most important matters
facing the west due to the
fact
that...
VOCABULARY

11.

INTRODUCTION:
Environmental issues are some of the
most common challenges facing
developing countries in Africa
nowadays. It can be observed that....
VOCABULARY

12.

Examples are necessary in practically all of the Task 2
questions.
Therefore mastering how to present an example can
guarantee you points.
VOCABULARY
Here are some structures to follow...

13.

For example, it should be noted that
recent studies by the IMF show that
London is one of the most important
financial centres in the world. This may
be due to the....
VOCABULARY

14.

For instance, there are a number of
studies by various Governmental
bodies that show that Norwegian oil
plays an important part in the global
economy. This may be due to the fact ...
VOCABULARY

15.

2. REPETITION
VOCABULARY

16.

You can improve your cohesion by repeating
key nouns in your paragraph.
To get a higher score substitute them with
synonyms, for example if my essay is about air
pollution I could use:
These fumes,
The smog,
Air contamination,
This serious issue...
It needs to be dealt with severely....
VOCABULARY

17.

3. TRANSITION SIGNALS
VOCABULARY

18.

Transition signals give a paragraph
coherence because they guide your reader
From one idea to the next.
For a list of points you can use first, second,
next and finally.
To introduce a conclusion you can use clearly,
in summary, in conclusion.
VOCABULARY
To introduce a result use accordingly, as a result
of, as a consequence of.

19.

4. CONSISTENT
PRONOUNS
VOCABULARY

20.

Use consistent pronouns, avoid changing from
singular to plural, first to second person,
for example;
You can see how students have changed over the last
decade, in the 60s a student was often seen as struggling
in economic hardship.
It can be seen how students have changed over the last
decade, in the 60s they were often seen as struggling in
economic hardship.
VOCABULARY
*However, you may need to bend this rule a little just to
show the examiner your wide vocabulary of synonyms.

21.

5. ONE IDEA
VOCABULARY

22.

Finally, try to keep to
one central idea per
paragraph, this makes it easier to
follow, especially in a short essay
such as the IELTS Task 2.
VOCABULARY

23.

Hi Ben,
How are you today?
I would like to thank you for all the
help. I got 7.5 in my IELTS exam. (8.5
Listening, 8 Reading, 7 Writing and 7
Speaking).
Your podcasts, especially the essay checks
and your tips on how to structure the
essay helped me a lot in my examination.
VOCABULARY
Thank you again, and more power to your
program.
Best Regards,
Mary

24.

Dear Ben,
I get my score and I meet the
requirement!!!
Overall 7.5 with 8.5 in listening, 8 in
reading, 7 in writing and speaking.
I am so happy about it.
VOCABULARY
Thank you so much for your help!
Julia

25.

Hi Ben
I am writing to thank you for your kind assistance.
Your method works.
I took and exam twice since I had purchased your ebook.
I got an incredible result in Writing immediately (7.5 in
January and 8 in March), although previous results was 6
and 6.5
Could you tell me if you have similar methods or materials
related to Speaking part?
It is highly important to me because my last result was
Speaking 6.5.
I failed again and I am so frustrated.
VOCABULARY
I was wondering if you could give me some advice related
to my problem?
Thank you in advance.

26.

Hi Ben,
thanks a lot for your help! I was great! I
got a 7.5 in writing! I am so happy! I
wrote the essay like you said in your
book! Perfect! Thanks for everything!
Cornelia
VOCABULARY