B2 Essay

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B2 Essay
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Remember
Plan
1
Write
2
Review
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Plan
Underline
Keywords
Brainstorm
Select
Ideas
Set
Expressions
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Underline keywords
In your English class, you have been talking about how to be a
successful person. Now your English teacher has asked you to write an
essay using all the notes and giving reasons or examples for your point of
view.
Essay question
Without failure there can be no success. Do you agree?
Notes
Things to write about:
1. motivation
2. experience
3. ………….(your own idea)
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Underline keywords
In your English class, you have been talking about how to be a
successful person. Now your English teacher has asked you to write an
essay using all the notes and giving reasons or examples for your point of
view.
Essay question
Without failure there can be no success. Do you agree?
Notes
Things to write about:
1. motivation
2. experience
3. ………….(your own idea)
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Brainstorm Ideas
More
determined
after setbacks –
Albert Einstein
Improve with
experience –
years of
dedication football
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Instant success
brings problems –
celebrities behave
recklessly

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Select ideas & think of useful
expressions
Paragraph 1
Introduction: paraphrase question
Paragraph 2
Motivation
Paragraph 3
Experience
Paragraph 4
Problems of instant success
Paragraph 5
Conclusion: your opinion
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Select ideas & think of useful
expressions
Paragraph 1
Introduction: successful people in life have
many failures behind them
Paragraph 2
Motivation - More determined after setbacks
– Albert Einstein
Paragraph 3
Experience - Improve with experience –years
of dedication - football
Paragraph 4
Problems of instant success - Instant success
brings problems – celebrities behave
recklessly
Paragraph 5
Conclusion: you will handle your success
better if you had had to work hard for it
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Write
Include All
Content
Link Ideas
Topic
Vocbulary
Set
Expressions
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Paragraph 1: Introduction
It is often said that it is impossible to succeed
the first time you do something, and that the
most successful people in life have many
failures behind them.
Set expression
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Paragraph 1: Introduction
It is often said that it is impossible to succeed
the first time you do something, and that the
most successful people in life have many
failures behind them.
Set expression
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Paragraph 1: Introduction
It is often said that it is impossible to succeed
the first time you do something, and that the
most successful people in life have many
failures behind them.
Vocabulary
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Paragraph 1: Introduction
It is often said that it is impossible to succeed
the first time you do something, and that the
most successful people in life have many
failures behind them.
Vocabulary
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Paragraph 2: 1st Note
The majority of people are more determined
and motivated to attain their goals after they
have suffered a setback. For example, Albert
Einstein struggled and failed several times in
his life but he kept working hard to overcome
obstacles and he was eventually successful.
Opinion
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Paragraph 2: 1st Note
The majority of people are more determined
and motivated to attain their goals after they
have suffered a setback. For example, Albert
Einstein struggled and failed several times in
his life but he kept working hard to overcome
obstacles and he was eventually successful.
Opinion
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Paragraph 2: 1st Note
The majority of people are more determined
and motivated to attain their goals after they
have suffered a setback. For example, Albert
Einstein struggled and failed several times in
his life but he kept working hard to overcome
obstacles and he was eventually successful.
Reason or example
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Paragraph 2: 1st Note
The majority of people are more determined
and motivated to attain their goals after they
have suffered a setback. For example, Albert
Einstein struggled and failed several times in
his life but he kept working hard to overcome
obstacles and he was eventually successful.
Reason or example
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Paragraph 2: 1st Note
The majority of people are more determined
and motivated to attain their goals after they
have suffered a setback. For example, Albert
Einstein struggled and failed several times in
his life but he kept working hard to overcome
obstacles and he was eventually successful.
Useful expression/Linkers
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Paragraph 2: 1st Note
The majority of people are more determined
and motivated to attain their goals after they
have suffered a setback. For example, Albert
Einstein struggled and failed several times in
his life but he kept working hard to overcome
obstacles and he was eventually successful.
Useful expression/Linkers
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Paragraph 2: 1st Note
The majority of people are more determined
and motivated to attain their goals after they
have suffered a setback. For example, Albert
Einstein struggled and failed several times in
his life but he kept working hard to overcome
obstacles and he was eventually successful.
Vocabulary
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Paragraph 2: 1st Note
The majority of people are more determined
and motivated to attain their goals after they
have suffered a setback. For example, Albert
Einstein struggled and failed several times in
his life but he kept working hard to overcome
obstacles and he was eventually successful.
Vocabulary
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Paragraph 3: 2nd Note
Moreover, people usually improve and
become more successful when they gain
experience. In football, for instance, it takes
many years of dedication to obtain the skills
necessary to become a top player.
Opinion
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Paragraph 3: 2nd Note
Moreover, people usually improve and
become more successful when they gain
experience. In football, for instance, it takes
many years of dedication to obtain the skills
necessary to become a top player.
Opinion
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Paragraph 3: 2nd Note
Moreover, people usually improve and
become more successful when they gain
experience. In football, for instance, it takes
many years of dedication to obtain the skills
necessary to become a top player.
Reason or example
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Paragraph 3: 2nd Note
Moreover, people usually improve and
become more successful when they gain
experience. In football, for instance, it takes
many years of dedication to obtain the skills
necessary to become a top player.
Reason or example
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Paragraph 3: 2nd Note
Moreover, people usually improve and
become more successful when they gain
experience. In football, for instance, it takes
many years of dedication to obtain the skills
necessary to become a top player.
Useful expression/Linkers
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Paragraph 3: 2nd Note
Moreover, people usually improve and
become more successful when they gain
experience. In football, for instance, it takes
many years of dedication to obtain the skills
necessary to become a top player.
Useful expression/Linkers
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Paragraph 3: 2nd Note
Moreover, people usually improve and
become more successful when they gain
experience. In football, for instance, it takes
many years of dedication to obtain the skills
necessary to become a top player.
Vocabulary
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Paragraph 3: 2nd Note
Moreover, people usually improve and
become more successful when they gain
experience. In football, for instance, it takes
many years of dedication to obtain the skills
necessary to become a top player.
Vocabulary
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Paragraph 4: 3rd Note
On the other hand, people who have
become famous overnight normally find it
difficult to deal with the constant public
attention. These celebrities sometimes behave
recklessly, take drugs or drink too much to
escape the pressures of being famous and
successful.
Opinion
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Paragraph 4: 3rd Note
On the other hand, people who have
become famous overnight normally find it
difficult to deal with the constant public
attention. These celebrities sometimes behave
recklessly, take drugs or drink too much to
escape the pressures of being famous and
successful.
Opinion
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Paragraph 4: 3rd Note
On the other hand, people who have
become famous overnight normally find it
difficult to deal with the constant public
attention. These celebrities sometimes behave
recklessly, take drugs or drink too much to
escape the pressures of being famous and
successful.
Reason or example
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Paragraph 4: 3rd Note
On the other hand, people who have
become famous overnight normally find it
difficult to deal with the constant public
attention. These celebrities sometimes behave
recklessly, take drugs or drink too much to
escape the pressures of being famous and
successful.
Reason or example
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Paragraph 4: 3rd Note
On the other hand, people who have
become famous overnight normally find it
difficult to deal with the constant public
attention. These celebrities sometimes behave
recklessly, take drugs or drink too much to
escape the pressures of being famous and
successful.
Useful expression/Linkers
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Paragraph 4: 3rd Note
On the other hand, people who have
become famous overnight normally find it
difficult to deal with the constant public
attention. These celebrities sometimes behave
recklessly, take drugs or drink too much to
escape the pressures of being famous and
successful.
Useful expression/Linkers
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Paragraph 4: 3rd Note
On the other hand, people who have
become famous overnight normally find it
difficult to deal with the constant public
attention. These celebrities sometimes behave
recklessly, take drugs or drink too much to
escape the pressures of being famous and
successful.
Vocabulary
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Paragraph 4: 3rd Note
On the other hand, people who have
become famous overnight normally find it
difficult to deal with the constant public
attention. These celebrities sometimes behave
recklessly, take drugs or drink too much to
escape the pressures of being famous and
successful.
Vocabulary
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Paragraph 5: Conclusion
In conclusion, it is possible to have success
without failure, but in my opinion, it may be
better to fail first as you will handle and
appreciate your success better if you had had
to work hard for it.
Opinion
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Paragraph 5: Conclusion
In conclusion, it is possible to have success
without failure, but in my opinion, it may be
better to fail first as you will handle and
appreciate your success better if you had had
to work hard for it.
Opinion
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Paragraph 5: Conclusion
In conclusion, it is possible to have success
without failure, but in my opinion, it may be
better to fail first as you will handle and
appreciate your success better if you had had
to work hard for it.
Reason or example
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Paragraph 5: Conclusion
In conclusion, it is possible to have success
without failure, but in my opinion, it may be
better to fail first as you will handle and
appreciate your success better if you had had
to work hard for it.
Reason or example
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Paragraph 5: Conclusion
In conclusion, it is possible to have success
without failure, but in my opinion, it may be
better to fail first as you will handle and
appreciate your success better if you had had
to work hard for it.
Useful expression/Linkers
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Paragraph 5: Conclusion
In conclusion, it is possible to have success
without failure, but in my opinion, it may be
better to fail first as you will handle and
appreciate your success better if you had had
to work hard for it.
Useful expression/Linkers
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Paragraph 5: Conclusion
In conclusion, it is possible to have success
without failure, but in my opinion, it may be
better to fail first as you will handle and
appreciate your success better if you had had
to work hard for it.
Vocabulary
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Paragraph 5: Conclusion
In conclusion, it is possible to have success
without failure, but in my opinion, it may be
better to fail first as you will handle and
appreciate your success better if you had had
to work hard for it.
Vocabulary
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Review
Grammar
Vocabulary
Punctuation
Spelling
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THE END
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